You need to get rid of the "the" in the beginning. Also change "has" to "have" because you are talking about more than one person. Also from "turned" all the way to "gender" the syntax is so off that you cannot understand what you are trying to say so I cannot help you there. My suggestion is that you resubmit the question but this time tell us what exactly you are trying to say so we can help you.
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